client- broken buliding

the subject of this photo is the hole in the ceiling in on of the classrooms castle. i took this photo to show how badly my school is damaged. this photo focuses on the main subject which is a damaged school because it shows a hole in the ceiling. this photo mens something to me as its the school that i go to, which would be needed to get fixed. this photo also has elements of design such as the lines in the hole and the lines around the hole. i like this photo as its just focused on the main subject. i asked around my class room and most people said that they liked it as you can see what wrong and instead of looking for the problem you can see it straight on. also some people said that the photo could of been closer to see directly put the hole. 

i could improve my photo by moving more closer to the hole to see up it. 

 I looked on the internet for a photo that looks like mine. as its got winers going over the hole but on my  photo iv got more texture and designs on it. i ask around the classroom which photo was better and they said mine as theres more to look at.